A boy named Peter Croome was chased through Wapping by two adults, for walking into the courtyard of their estate when a car was exiting to collect his ball. The boy claimed that one of the men was holding a stick, but the suspect denies.
A boy named Peter Croome was chased through Wapping by two adults, for walking into the courtyard of their estate when a car was exiting to collect his ball. The boy claimed that one of the men was holding a stick, but the suspect denies.
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March 1, 2013 at 4:37 pm
You’ve captured the journalistic style nicely here Peter, although if you read the end of the first sentence aloud, you might consider adding further commas? I could well believe your story so far.